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.now how did you get into this mess Rabbit?

conversations as suggested by crimsonlurker on tumblr - I got quite a few differents suggestions but decided to go with this one ;>


RABBIT/Bunny Bennett - *whitebunny, THE SPINE/David Michael Bennett & HATCHWORTH/Sam Luke of Steam Powered Giraffe</b>

.media: whatever I found laying around at the moment - aka fineliners, color pens, charcoal, markers, gelpens | size: A4
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Adorable adorable adorable adorable ADORABLE!!!!
This is the cutest dang thing I've ever seen! The costumes are dead on, but you added your own vision! The height difference is wonderful and I'm glad you thought of it. The faces are right, but not too detailed or cluttered. The background is lovely, and I love the inclusion of Qwerty.
The expressions are a bit blah. Perhaps if Hatchy had been smiling or something it would add a bit more fun to the piece. However, it certainly doesn't detract from the work, and their faces definitely get the message across, so no harm in it.
As a sort of side note, there is a certain femininity that I always look for in drawings of Rabbit; yes, he's a boy, but he's also far more girlish than HatchWorth, The Jon, and The Spine. You captured it very nicely, especially in Rabbit's hands, legs, and face. I appreciate it.
Well done!
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This piece, is of course, very funny, very sweet and very cute. It definitely displays the perfect kind of shenanigans the robot boys undoubtedly get into on a regular basis. I also love your inclusion and good application of Hatchworth, who is far too often overlooked in a lot of recent art.

That being said, there are a few things that could be improved.

For one thing, your medium. It's almost *too* textured, between what looks (to me) like colored pencil or charcoal or something on very textured paper. It detracts a bit from the real focus of the piece- the three robots- and puts it too much on even ground with the background. It even inexplicably adds texture to things that should be smooth, like their clothing. If you can't get smoother paper or mediums, maybe consider smoothing out some of the texture in Photoshop with the Smudge or focus-changing tools (or whatever equivalent you tend to use).

You also seem to have a slight problem with contrast, a lot of details seem to be lost on The Spine, although I don't mind some of the details being less clear in the background, it helps add to the depth-of-field.

As I said, the subject and dialogue are both funny and spot-on, there are just a few issues of technique that could be resolved.
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Mirror-Draco Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
one second... poor spine XD
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shikabane-no-bousou Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Student General Artist
> v <
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Mirror-Draco Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He's always gotta deal with Rabbit's shenanigans! 
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shikabane-no-bousou Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Student General Artist
.kekeke, indeed~ can't be an easy life for him > v <
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PiuPiu-Littlebird Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist

Ah, my sides... :dignity-laugh: 


Well done :clap:

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shikabane-no-bousou Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student General Artist
• v • 
.thank you~
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SadisticCarnage Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist
I love these boys. They are perfect.
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shikabane-no-bousou Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
.hehe, thnks~!
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Falcor24 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Student General Artist
I think I see fourth face in the wires.
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shikabane-no-bousou Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
.hehe yea, I couldn't resist drawing QWERTY ;>
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